＜　Unit 4　＞

Model paragraph

Title: My brother, Matthew

I am going to write about my brother Matthew. He is good-looking, very athletic and outgoing. He is very tall and has a muscular build. He has short straight grey hair, blue eyes and a long straight nose. His face is rather narrow, and he has a mustache. Matthew is very athletic. He competes regularly in triathlons, and bicycle races. He swims every morning, runs in the afternoons, and rides his bicycle on weekends. Matthew has a very social personality. He has many friends whom he meets often. Matthew throws a dinner party probably once a month, and you can hear his guests laughing heartily as he tells humorous stories. I am lucky to have a brother like Matthew.

〔評価のポイント〕

1. この家族あるいは友達の紹介文を読んで、どんな点が興味深いと思いましたか。

2. トピックセンテンスは適切でしたか。

　　(1)内容面

　　(2)形式面(文としての正しさ、意味の明瞭さ)

3.　本文の内宮は適切でしたか

　　(1)特徴１の内容は具体的でしたか。

　　(2)文の並べ方の順序は適切でしたか。

　　(3)特徴 ２の内容は具体的でしたか。

　　(4)文の並べ方の順序は適切でしたか。

4.　結びでのまとめ方は適切でしたか。

5.　もう少し説明を 補って欲しいところなどはありませんでしたか。